It’s the middle of the day
sun shining bright
but it is as dark as night
The moons in the way
it’s blocking the sun
the solar eclipse has just begun
The time is passing
minute by minute
the solar eclipse is just at its limit
The sun’s coming back
second by second
then when it’s done
it’s back to the sun
Hi Jaben ,
did you see the eclipse a while back did you watch it. did you get the special eclipse glasses so you don’t burn your eyes when you look at it. your poem was great and filled with detail. did you set up for the eclipse?
sincerely Gavin
Hi Gavin it’s Jaben
Ya I watched the eclipse my grandpa got some of the special glasses
see you soon
Jaben
Hey Jaben,
I liked your poem about the eclipse. I could feel the slow progression as the shadow crossed the sun. I thought you really captured the essence of what what its like to experience an eclipse.
Who knew you were a poet?
You’ll have to try another poem.
Grandpa Don